Screenplay and notes

So I've been working on my screenplay for bumbus attonibus. Right now it's about 5 pages long, which I'm going to assume translates to about 8 minutes of movie. I'd like it to end up being around 15 minutes long so I'm trying to expand parts of it that are a little unformed at this point. You can download the screenplay and then my own notes on it if you're at all interested in my thought process behind it.

Bumbus Attonibus Screenplay
My Notes/Thoughts

This week I've been filming the replicated nature backgrounds, I'll post some of that later this week when I begin uploading it.